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Docker-DCO-1.1-Signed-off-by: Fred Lifton <fred.lifton@docker.com> (github: fredlf)

Fred Lifton authored on 2014/07/18 08:41:50
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 # Getting Started with Docker Hub
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-This section provides a quick introduction to the [Docker Hub](https://hub.docker.com)
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-and will show you how to create an account.
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+This section provides a quick introduction to the [Docker Hub](https://hub.docker.com),
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+including how to create an account.
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 The [Docker Hub](https://hub.docker.com) is a centralized resource for working with
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 Docker and its components. Docker Hub helps you collaborate with colleagues and get the
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 ## Creating a Docker Hub Account
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-There are two ways for you to register and create a Docker Hub account:
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+There are two ways for you to register and create an account:
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 1. Via the web, or
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 2. Via the command line.
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 ### Register via the web
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 Fill in the [sign-up form](https://hub.docker.com/account/signup/) by
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-choosing your user name and password and specifying email address. You can also sign up
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-for the Docker Weekly mailing list, which has lots of information about what's going on
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-in the world of Docker.
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+choosing your user name and password and entering a valid email address. You can also
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+sign up for the Docker Weekly mailing list, which has lots of information about what's
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 ![Register using the sign-up page](/userguide/register-web.png)
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 ### Confirm your email
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-Once you've filled in the form, check your email for a welcome message and confirmation
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+Once you've filled in the form, check your email for a welcome message asking for
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+confirmation so we can activate your account.
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-![Confirm your registration](/userguide/register-confirm.png)
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 ##  Next steps
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